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I thought this book was going to be just another one in a stack of mediocre New Adult stories. I couldn't have been more wrong. Breaking the Reins
has great characters, a believable storyline, and some nice swoon.
Following the death of her grandmother and her beloved horse, Hercules, college sophomore Hannah Taylor finds herself struggling:
Not long ago, I lived my perfect life as a Taylor heiress; just going to college, loving my boyfriend, and attending his games. Then it all changed when my grandma died, and I tried to figure out how to juggle college, the ranch, and learn about my father's business, as well as enjoy my boyfriend's success.
As if that wasn't enough, more trouble found me, and everything changed a second time. A broken horse had been thrown into my arms, and some guy came strutting into my life and messed with my feelings. It was too much of a coincidence meeting him on the road and having him move in next door.
When Hannah's long-time boyfriend, Eric, the world-renowned polo player, takes notice of Leo, the new guy in town, noticing
her, his jealous streak gets a little brighter.
Each time the man smiled at me, Eric's fingers dug into my skin and I pressed my lips together, wiling the scream to stay in my throat.
Hannah feels herself inexplicably drawn to Leo. He's gorgeous and sweet. And he can get through to the rescued horse like no one else. Hannah and Leo try to deny their feelings for each other.
"I tried staying away from you, Hannah. I really did...but I can't. So I'm telling you, you have to stay away from me too."
The further away Hannah seems to drift from Eric, the tighter he holds on. It isn't long before he takes things to a new level.
"You brought that upon yourself," Eric said, serving wine to the flute set in front of me. "I don't want to hurt you, but each time you misbehave, each time you oppose what I tell you to do, I'll have to hurt you."
I'm not going to spoil what happens, but I really liked the way this story played out. Eric didn't start off as evil--it was little increments of shifts in power until he became a monster.
What didn't I like? I felt like Eric got to be too
bad. I'm not sure if he remained realistic. I also thought that the reason that Hannah stayed with him was a bit contrived, but I will give her the benefit of the doubt because of her age. With that being said, I liked the characters, especially Leo. I thought that Hannah was a strong woman in a tough situation, and I wish that she had gone to someone for help. Horse lovers will love the descriptions and relationships that the characters have with the horses (as well as their personalities), but non-animal lovers will still enjoy this story.
Because of its sensitive subject matter, I won't say that it's for everyone, but if you're looking for a well-written, realistic New Adult novel with an interesting plot and characters that you'll fall for, Breaking the Reins
is the story for you.